Wednesday, 13 August 2014

Show Don't tell Create a Character

WALT: Show Don’t tell to Describe and expand on one Feature of our Character.

Ariana had beautiful white cloud like fairy wings. With diamonds in the sides of the wings. They Glowed in the dark so when she travels she can see where she is going. If she sings in the daylight her wings shrink down in her body so you can’t see them and then at night they will grow wider than her arms.

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