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Tuesday, 13 October 2015

Haiku, Similes, Alliteration

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Walt: Use alliteration, similes and haiku poems to describe things e.g fish.


Haiku
Fish swimming around
Ocean blue the water is
2433118-pictures_bolt_3.jpeg Orange and golden.


Similes
The fish can swim as fast as a cartoon dog called Bolt.


Alliteration

Six silly fish swimming sadly.

9 comments:

  1. I hope the fish aren't too sad, Kiana. Great use of alliteration. Well done!

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  2. Hello Kiana like the way you put the pictures next to the writing to show what you were talking about.

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    1. Thanks it was kind of hard putting the same photo next to the same writting

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  3. Hi Kiana I like the colour you chose it suits the gold fish. I like your headings.

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  4. Hello Kiana that Is a wonderful Haiku I really like the color you chose for your writing.

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